On editing your own writing

When I edit my own text, I make comments like those shown in the images. A few of my own:

  • Doesn’t feel like you know what you’re talking about
  • Nice start — dig deeper
  • Just say what you mean
  • You lost me
  • Feels fake — write from the heart (or, write to your muse)
  • Passive!

When I write books I try to complete a chapter, then get away from it for at least a month, then come back and edit it like this.

The images here are from the excellent movie, Finding Forrester.

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